The Battle Within

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The Battle Within

I stand here in the wilderness;
of this dark and dreary world;
Surrounded by such madness;
Decaying my soul down to its core.
 
I look upon the light;
It barely glimmers through.
 
Reaching to touch it;
It penetrates my carcass;
Exhibiting the life  I once knew.
 
A rotting pile of debris;
Left behind from this world’s storms;
Sprang forth from the depths of its grave;
Shaking me with violent  force.
 
Light and debris;
Exchanging their blows;
Day after day a bloody brawl.
 
Falling apart debris did lose;
As day after day more light shown through.
 
I won’t  pick up the pieces;
I’ll leave them there behind;
There on the ground for birds to dine.
 
No grave for debris will you ever find.
 
Out through the light;
Life did sprout;
Day after day growing throughout.

~Cathy Pittillo

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lisaner commented on The Battle Within

09-21-2012

I enjoyed this poem! Good imagery of the triumph of growing to the light shining through the holes left by the bloody brawl. Good work!

cttgad

09/21/2012

Thank you lisaner.:) When I wrote this poem it kinda made me feel like a super hero as the light and burst through. My favorite saying, " Live victoriously conquering the world and never let it corrupt you." Thanks for the great review, I look forward to others.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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