THUNDER

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THUNDER

Thunder

I ask for the sound
of thunder, and
though I am granted pain,
My prayers for release
remain unanswered.



Tim J. Cullen
8-16-07

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jademelissa74 commented on THUNDER

06-18-2009

I can follow this poem to the end. Taken at face value, I gathered pain, frustration and hope. It leads to many open avenues for discussion. Short, yet sharp as a knife! Great Job! You have managed to reach the reader.

chasingshadows

06/18/2009

Thanks so much!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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chasingshadows’s Poems (19)

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FEVER 1
Light 0
Sleep? 1
Could It Be? 1
Withdraw 1
Harvest 0
Visions 0
I 1
The Bond 0
Phoenix 0
Head Blossom 2
FOCUS 1
THUNDER 0
Breath 2
LIFE 0
the broken 0
Whispers 1
Tomorrow 0
Chasing Shadows 0