This thing...

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    • tonguetied
    • is already having a GREAT day!! Hope it stays that way!!

    This thing...

     Oh my goodness...what is this thing that happens to ur brain when that special someone is close that makes the air stop moving and the thoughts to stop processing in ur brain.
    Oh my goodness...what is that thing that happens to ur heart when that special person is all up in ur face that makes u feel like no one else in the world matters.
    Oh my goodness...what is that thing that overcomes me when he pulls my body close to his and the heat of us combines to create this life that will forever be the thing that he brought to me that no one can ever take away...
    Oh my goodness...the things that this man does to me feel true and honest...
    This thing must be love.

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    SILKYTWEED commented on This thing...

    08-19-2009

    Great Write, I was about to yell LOVE as I was reading your piece (smile), very riveting as I hung and reminisced on my own life love experiences...Thanks for sharing!
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    dirty1flavor commented on This thing...

    08-04-2009

    cute i'm impressed this a different you the took my breath away but do you enjoy it writing that is it helps me cope when so many people don't understand me when my thoughts are put into words i nolonger have to be myself reading them holding conversation with myself who would listen to me , no body else liked the peom it was beautiful
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    tonguetied

    08/04/2009

    i really do like the writing...I like it a lot when i just type and dont think...but i think alot.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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