this is me

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  • Sadness

    this is me

    i am darkness and light
    i am smothing in between
    i am a shadow in the dark

    i can't smile or laugh
    i can't say what i feel
    i can't feel any pain

    i'm to broken apart
    i have shattered to the smallest piece there is
    i can't feel anymore

    i'm from the darkest deptin this world
    i just suffer even more each day
    i just can't escape
    nothing can save me from this dark
    from this pain

    i'm going to an even darker dept
    i can't change my future
    i am tired of this
    i want to be saved
    but i just can't
    i'm trying to run away from this dark
    but i can't
    someone help me please
    i beg

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    PunoAngulus commented on this is me

    02-11-2009

    sharing your struggles through imagery of your soul and through words to create this world of yours that we can all relate too. beautiful. Brilliant.

    mykhail commented on this is me

    02-11-2009

    I gave this a 9, a few misspellings but a truly and great poem ... for someone so young, your work is exceptional!

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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