This Feeling

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    This Feeling

    This feeling is new, this feeling is strange
    My tears they do fall, they fall down like rain.
    They be not of sadness and not of pain
    They be of a joy, a joy none the same.

    This feeling is sweet, sweet as can be
    It changes my world and it changes me.
    Difficult to feel, and hard to explain
    I am drenched in it, from what I have gained.

    Your love is gentle, your love is gentle, your love is kind
    You're always there, always on my mind.
    Sleep comes hard, a lack thereof
    And when I dream, I dream of your love.

    This poem is over, this poem is through
    But my feelings are still there, there for you.
    Although it's over, and the end is near
    I want you to know, that with you its all gone,
    The pain , agony, lonlieness, and fear.

    Whats there, you ask? It's easy, you see
    Its my love for you, and who you make me want you be.

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    Claude commented on This Feeling

    02-27-2009

    I dig the feel of the poem but you lose me a little towards the end in your rhyme scheme

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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