there was...

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    there was...
    sweat forming avalanches on his brow
    oily skin causing beads upon the upper lip
    fingers clenching tight
    forearm bulging and throbbing
    like a piston catching fire
    shoulders hunching
    hips gyrating
    deep intake
    heavy exhale
    choke
    he can't get the lawn mower started

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    Niecy commented on there was...

    04-09-2009

    Wow, very unique Mind Imagery! Like a candid camera shot you captrued there was... 'hot'! I really like! :)
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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