The Woman in Me

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    The Woman in Me

    "The Woman in Me"

    Not knowing who I am
    Remebering who I was

    Wanting to know what I'll become
    To know how far I will go

    Loving with all my soul
    Getting hurt over and over again

    Trying to be happy
    But usually sad

    How can I change who I am
    To become the woman I want to be

    But who is this woman? Where is she?
    Is she lost in the past from the hurt she's been through
    Or somewhere in the future that no one can reach

    Looking out, looking in
    Hope I can find the woman with in
    The one that is happy,
    The one I can not see, that is looking back at me....

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    Lucho commented on The Woman in Me

    09-21-2009

    WOW. I am at that point right now too. I am searching for myself but I am not able to see who I am and what I should be. You have moved me once again.

    apoetslife commented on The Woman in Me

    07-16-2009

    I think that this poem relates to alot of people,and reaches depths deep down. apoetslife

    Bongky commented on The Woman in Me

    05-01-2009

    that is some introspection there... aren't we all but human? great poem (despite a typo there, lol)

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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