Tell Me

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    Tell Me

    "Tell Me"

    Tell me is it a secret?
    A secret from me, a secret from her.

    Tell me is it real?
    What do you feel.

    Tell me do you care when I look in your eyes?
    Do you feel when you see me cry.

    Tell me how it is when we're a part?
    How do you feel, am I in your heart?

    Tell me, do I light up your day when you see me first?
    When I'm not around do you feel worse.

    Tell me is it a secret?
    A secret from you, a secret from us.

    Tell me the answers that I need today?
    So I can move on in some kind of way...

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    Lucho commented on Tell Me

    08-08-2009

    Nice words. I like this poem because it reminds me how important communication is in a relationship. It is never fun to not know how much someone cares for you or if they miss you and think of you all the time. I hope you get your answers.

    UnworthyFather commented on Tell Me

    06-14-2009

    Wonderful portrayal of a lover caught in second place. Someone who needs to feel their love returned wholeheartedly. Great Job!! Thanks for sharing.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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