The Wind Returns

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  • What Brings You Peace

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    I have shown this one to a few people i know.  i constantly have to let them know , in this poem I speak as though through her perspective

    The Wind Returns
    Assess still born clatter
    Petition she might stay
    Cinder to ashes, scatter
    Forlorn wind, I pray

    Chronicled illicit affair
    Regrets our choice
    In her lair
    Abated wind rejoice

    Tell me
    Quiet, wait
    Show me
    Open Gate

    And
    The
    Wind
    Returns

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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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