THE TRIAL

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    THE TRIAL

     "YOU DON’T KNOW ME, BUT I HOLD YOU TIGHT IN MY ARMS AND I AM WHISPERING IN YOUR EAR: GOD LOVES YOU!"


    Diamond hidden in a pearl oyster

    Are you ready?

    If i am opening your shell

    Will you have the power to shine?


    And you little wheat's seed,

    If you will be spread

    Can you really germinate

    Under the heavy furrow?


    And you little flower bud,

    If I give you today some petals

    Can you really give some colour

    To your flower?


    And you beautiful bird

    With your wounded feather,

    If I take care of you

    Can you hurry to fly?


    And you... foreign traveller

    Abandoned, exilat in this world...

    If I bring you home

    Can you wear God's name?



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    Merlyn commented on THE TRIAL

    07-22-2009

    wow, Lidutza. That gave me goosebumps. Bravo. Praise God!
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    RandyHargis1 commented on THE TRIAL

    06-22-2009

    Great self-examination poem! Puts the final decision on the reader so they can not blame God. I love it!
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    optimistic commented on THE TRIAL

    06-20-2009

    Diamond hidden in a pearl oyster. I like this first line very beautiful, lots of thoughts came to mind one that stuck was GOD. then the concept to abandoned the worl and have someone help to bring you out of this pearl oyster. Great imagery and poem.
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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