RENEWER

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    RENEWER

     Today I am SON,
    Not a slave any more!
    I am complete now,
    Not a piece from a whole.

    Because The One Who is Holly
    Came down on this earth.
    He came to me and asked:
    "Do you want Me to make you feel complete?"

    I said "Yes" because I was broken
    And I had tears in my eyes.
    Jesus renewed my heart
    And now I'm a new person.

    Today I feel happy
    Cose Jesus feel my life.
    I'm more and more like my Saviour
    And this is a reason to praise Him!

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    kmeadows commented on RENEWER

    06-21-2009

    ok I liked this. There was a typo in second stanza. I assume you ment Holy. No biggie. If you ment Holly then I am reading it wrong. In the last stanza I think you ment 'cause. As in "because". Im not picking, honest, just making you aware. All in all I did very much enjoy this piece. I never tire of hearing about how someone is touched by Jesus. Praise God. Have a blessed day!
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