the thing about you

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    the thing about you




    the thing about you is

    ur fun

    u make me laugh

    u make me feel more alive

    and,okay,you make me

    a little crazy sometimes

    but there are these moments

    in my mind

    crystal clear images

    of you and me

    and how we fit together

    and it all makes such perfect

    sense,and i know what i want.

    i want time with you

    i want to hear u whisper

    and talk and yell

    i want to touch you so softly

    it puts u to sleep

    i want to fall in love

    so deeply with u that

    even when its not all fun

    i can look at u and say

    as i do now

    "yes ur the one"

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    KuKa24 commented on the thing about you

    09-10-2009

    I love this poem. the way u express it; i relate........ sinple t the point
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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