The Soul You Left Behind

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    The Soul You Left Behind

    The Soul You Left Behind

    Damned is what I feel whenever we’re together.
    Aimlessly I wander here beside you
    as I watch the disappointment, heartache
    and pain you deal upon any unsuspecting soul
    that dares delight in your presence. Thus
    damning all around you to a life of misery, despair and
    death!

    Even knowing this…
    I beckon you ever nearer; gently reassuring
    you that there is no need for your loneliness and tears;
    for I am still here by your side.

    Feverishly, I work to assure you of my undying loyalty.
    Tediously and sweetly I strain to confirm the love and
    devotion you evoke in me and hope you’ll see the love I can not hide.

    Forever by your side, unable to let you go, I stand as…
    the soul you left behind. Here I stay with hope and love, yet fearing
    you will never see what you mean to me. I guess ‘tis my destiny, as the
    soul you left behind, to be damned to a life of
    Misery and Death.

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    anniebloom commented on The Soul You Left Behind

    06-29-2009

    you shout out for what had u kept inside for a long time. this is a very nice allegory yet indeed it is sad. i agreed with castlemist, hope this made u feel better. that's how i did, where some of my poems, had the strong connection with my life. read my newest poem i posted called FEAR NEEDS RAINBOW. anyway, great job! keep on writting

    castlemist commented on The Soul You Left Behind

    05-12-2009

    Nice, but sad...I hope getting this out made you feel better. Jerry

    amberain

    08/16/2009

    just writing it helps with the lonely, depressive feelings.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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