The Rain

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    This is the most recent poem I've written.  It done because over the last 3 or 4 weeks it has been raining just about every single day!!! 

    The Rain

    It's been raining now for
    I don't know how many days.
    The sun comes out briefly
    but never stays.

    You go outside and
    it's cold, damp, and dreary.
    Putting a chill in your bones
    making your soul tired & weary.

    Everything looks as
    if coated in grime.
    Because Mother Nature
    can be so cruel at times.

    Seeing stars in the sky
    would be such a wonderful sight.
    But alas it is raining
    even at night.

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    CasimirJash commented on The Rain

    10-08-2009

    rain is for the environment to help plants survive. we need rain but I know how you feel about the rain, I live in Texas, so I already know, it comes down very hard, down here. great poem I also hate when it rains at night, i mean it's soothing but also disturbing.

    WordSlinger commented on The Rain

    06-23-2009

    Quick and unique, I find anything wrong with this poe, actually to it's sensual, and very sexy, I find it any way that way.

    jademelissa74 commented on The Rain

    06-23-2009

    I love nature poems! You have managed to portrayed a well painted picture fo what's like during a rainy season! Great job! I love this piece!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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