The Rain

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    This is the most recent poem I've written.  It done because over the last 3 or 4 weeks it has been raining just about every single day!!! 

    The Rain

    It's been raining now for
    I don't know how many days.
    The sun comes out briefly
    but never stays.

    You go outside and
    it's cold, damp, and dreary.
    Putting a chill in your bones
    making your soul tired & weary.

    Everything looks as
    if coated in grime.
    Because Mother Nature
    can be so cruel at times.

    Seeing stars in the sky
    would be such a wonderful sight.
    But alas it is raining
    even at night.

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    CasimirJash commented on The Rain

    10-08-2009

    rain is for the environment to help plants survive. we need rain but I know how you feel about the rain, I live in Texas, so I already know, it comes down very hard, down here. great poem I also hate when it rains at night, i mean it's soothing but also disturbing.

    WordSlinger commented on The Rain

    06-23-2009

    Quick and unique, I find anything wrong with this poe, actually to it's sensual, and very sexy, I find it any way that way.

    jademelissa74 commented on The Rain

    06-23-2009

    I love nature poems! You have managed to portrayed a well painted picture fo what's like during a rainy season! Great job! I love this piece!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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