The Bad Place

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The Bad Place

Right now the Bad Place

Is where I’m at

Thoughts flying through my head

Just like a bat.

 

For I have been travelling alone

In this world

Leaving my emotions on the

Ground unfurled.

 

Having to go through things

All by myself

Makes me put feelings towards

People on a shelf.

 

Pushing away people that

May actually care

Can I let them in?  And

Do I dare?

 

Now some of you may think

That I am crazy

But life for me isn’t always

A rose or a daisy.

 

Thank goodness I don’t

Come here too often

Because being here for too long

Could be a nail in my coffin.

 

And even though being in

This place makes me cry

The creative juices really

Do fly.

 

 

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Mareann commented on The Bad Place

01-21-2010

Oh you did anellent job on this poem--- simply fantastic write! thanks for sharing--- Mary

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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