The Quite Man

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    The Quite Man

    The qiute man sits in the middle of a crowed room, studing the people around him.
    He see's a group of beautiful women giggleing, and crying about thier lives.
    A woman dressed up in blue, starts talking about the man of her dreams. As the story goes along tears begin to fall from her ambered colored eyes. Her long black hair hides the bruises on the back of neck. The torcher she goes through can be seen from across the room.
    The quite man sits in the middle of a crowed room, studing the people around him.
    He spots a man flirting with every skirt in the room, all but the woman in blue.

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    FoF commented on The Quite Man

    04-07-2009

    quiet - crowded - studying - sees - giggling - their - amber colored - torture - Suggest delete and try again. This work seems focused more on the actions of the woman in blue than the quiet man. No rating.

    Lyfe commented on The Quite Man

    04-04-2009

    Interesting thought and observation on " The Quiet Man "

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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