The Point of No Return '' --by CODY BOSTIC

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    The Point of No Return '' --by CODY BOSTIC

    People say I am the point of no return.These are the same people who only criticized my actions and washed their hands, clean of me like i were a germ. As the world spins, my life takes a turn and the measures of love and hate has been experienced, but not yet learned.I
    lived the life of hoodlum who didn't care.So as a result, peoples trust has to be earned, because right now it isn't there .When people see me they mumble, '' he is a crook''. They've only seen what they wanted to see without taking a second look.Have these people saw what i've seen and walked a mile in my jeans? Have they cried my tears and faced my fears? And furthermore, have they stood in front of a prejudiced
    judge and been confronted with many years.Blood brings forth sweet andpain.And clouds of darkness , amounts to thunderous rain. I've slipped and fell on the concrete floor.My are was broken and my ankles were sore. I gained the strength to get up and knock on heaven's door.An ANGEL opened it insisted that i take a tour.What
    I saw was smiles and people who seemed to be promblem free.But
    then a reflection from a mirror led me to believe that the only promblem was me. ''I AM GUITY, ''I SAID, i LIVED A LIFE FULL OF FIRE BURNING BENEATH MY FEET, I'HAVE LAUGHED IN THE EYES OF DANGER WITH TASTE OF BITTER-SWEET AND I HAVE BEEN TEMPTED BY THE DEVIL HIMSELF AT TIMES, WHEN I WERE WEAK. The DRUGS AND ALCOHOL SURELY KEPT ME ASLEEP.
    there was silence. THEN THE LORD APPEARED. HE TOOK ME
    BY THE HAND AND LOOKED CONCERNED. HE SAID, ''WALK WITH
    ME MY CHILD, OR YOU WILL ENTER THE DOOR, MARKED NO RETURN.

    WRITTEN BY; CODY BOSTIC

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    VLyric1 commented on The Point of No Return '' --by CODY BOSTIC

    03-11-2009

    You blew me away with this one Cody. The life and trials of a thug,from inside out.

    CODY123

    05/28/2009

    thank u

    ladyd37 commented on The Point of No Return '' --by CODY BOSTIC

    03-10-2009

    THIS S REALLY GOOD I TRYD TO GIVIT A 10 TJIS D@MN COMPUTER LOL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK I LOVED IT

    CODY123

    05/28/2009

    thank u

    abzidion commented on The Point of No Return '' --by CODY BOSTIC

    03-10-2009

    Excellent write Cody. looking forward to more

    CODY123

    05/28/2009

    thank u

    Robin commented on The Point of No Return '' --by CODY BOSTIC

    03-03-2009

    I can relate to this... youve been through so much and yet have survived and are stronger and more knowledgeable for it...God bless you, and this is a very, very good poem...Loved it...

    CODY123

    05/28/2009

    thank u

    CODY123 commented on The Point of No Return '' --by CODY BOSTIC

    03-02-2009

    dear cody my god son, keep God first, and you will make it in life.

    CODY123

    05/28/2009

    thank u

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