The Past

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The Past

I fear it more, and more than most,

With creeping pride it likes to boast.

It follows like a shadow ghost,

To stalk its darling victim host.

 

The host lets out a weep of deep,

The shadow closer moves to creep.

The host is seeking gains to reap,

But Shadow even haunts in sleep.

 

The shadow will not keep its peace,

It stays for a prolongèd lease,

And on the coast rejects release;

It’s got a vessel there to tease.

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silverpen commented on The Past

06-07-2009

It is really good! but its not one of my favorites out of your other ones :-D you're an amazing poet and should post the other ones as well!

Superman commented on The Past

06-06-2009

nice my berozer but (i cant belive im saying this) there is way to much rhyme and not enough meaning u can do better but this is very very very good

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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