The Grapefruit

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  • Grapefruit
    • xslayer2x
    • i wish i wish i wish... only if they would really come true..

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    Dont worry about trying to be nice or what ever if you leave a comment. just be honest.

    The Grapefruit

    Upon a ravish of light,
    a bliss is met through her gaze.
    Lifting the sense of an atone,
    never allowing me to fade.

    Leaving me warm under a star
    her colors enchant me into a dream
    where she is now golden
    embellishing me into the unseen.

    She is comely from within
    surpassing what many know.
    creating still words
    reflected upon her glow.

    For her eyes that enlight
    the slightest instant will remain
    and stay seeded upon this heart
    always renewd by her charming rain.

    For her these true words
    lay upon the face of the moon
    where we are forever reminded
    of the one whispered grapefruit.

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    stiches commented on The Grapefruit

    06-06-2009

    honstly as you asked.....that was great you must truly care of another soul a valued life indeed. my name is stiches we apear to be oppsite writers perhaps you can give me some pointers on how to create a feeling of happiness. contact me

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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