Something

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Something

There is something beneath nothing,
within a scar never seen
where your mind always is
another self in the shade.
distraction grips, 
with out any notice.
your mind is nothing,
your life is something
blind through the mirror,
a living attempt,
under the sky
we're away from dreams.
things are felt
from those who cannot.
an absent luminensce, 
something beneath nothing. 
There is something beneath nothing,
within a scar never seen
where your mind always is
another self in the shade.
distraction grips, 
with out any notice.
your mind is nothing,
your life is something
blind through the mirror,
a living attempt,
under the sky
we're away from dreams.
things are felt
from those who cannot.
an absent luminensce, 
something beneath nothing. 

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sevyn7 commented on Something

02-18-2011

Very deep poem, and well written, I love the flow, and the udertone of the poem.

xslayer2x

02/19/2011

thanks a lot! really appreciate it.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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