The Gift

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    The Gift

    You gave so much without knowing, I guess
    you never that your kindness was showing,
    a gift that is given no matter how big, or small
    should come from the heart!! or not at all.

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    Equity commented on The Gift

    02-26-2009

    Cute! Your writing apears to be direct expression of thought. I like the structure. I like the ideology within the expression. What I question is the experience that led to the expression in the first place. Allow you the gift share you in writing. Oh how exciting you'll be for everyone to see. A person who has come of age and is already to take the stage. You are more than who you have become. Take the wealth of your gifts (experience) and look within to explore hidden desires, wants and
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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