The fabric of our lives

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The fabric of our lives

         The fabric of our lives
  The fabric of our lives is a pattern of
              our being.
  The problems, obstacles, and test that
 we overcome in our lives become stiches
      that hold the materal together.
    With the strength of a good cloth
 and weave the fabric will not fray or
                 tear apart.
  Knowing everyone is not the same.
 There is one common thread that will
       hold  everything together.
      That is a blanket of love and
              understanding.
And what we learn in life may become
     a hand-me-down to our young.
          By Linda Rose Brito

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1990lh commented on The fabric of our lives

09-18-2009

yes i agree great concept and nice perspective of life you are a ver positive peson

lindabrito

09/18/2009

Yes, I have had to be very positive in my life. I had to grow up pretty fast to help my mother when my father passed away.

chubbc commented on The fabric of our lives

09-15-2009

i liked it very good concept to it flowed nice and has a great form definitly a nice poem

lindabrito

09/15/2009

Thankyou so much, on the comment of my poem.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

lindabrito’s Poems (12)

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Fire 0
Death, dying, and bereavement 1
College 2
Mother 2
My star 1
The fabric of our lives 2
My daughter 1
Song 3
Friends 3
Love is 1
Stars 1
Christmas 2