The Doughnut Challenge

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    this was the daily challenge and the kids (teens) thought it was cute and true to the sterotyping of officers and their passion for doughnuts-

    The Doughnut Challenge

    The nourishment of the men in blue,

    A few extra calories for me and you.

    A staple in the diet of men of law,

    Did he use the taser to get the bear claw?

    Crispy Creme and Dunkins a safe place, you bet,

    I haven't seen a cop pass one yet.

    I don't mean to insult the entire police force,

    There are a few who don't eat doughnuts, of course.

    But these few often retire before their time,

    A cop who hates doughnuts is not a good sign.

    So if its tickets that you hate to pay,

    Take a few doughnuts with you every day.

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    ginga commented on The Doughnut Challenge

    08-21-2009

    Hanna, LMAO and a clever and artistic write for sure. ginga

    pokeyspride commented on The Doughnut Challenge

    07-08-2009

    This is adorable, and so true; they do eat a lot of them don't they! ha!

    PRober commented on The Doughnut Challenge

    07-08-2009

    hahahah.. great poem and some fun rhymes! Write on!

    StandingBear commented on The Doughnut Challenge

    07-07-2009

    A nice take on the men in blue and always the doughnut connection. A nice touch of humor to help keep the balance of the world aligned correctly.

    WordSlinger commented on The Doughnut Challenge

    07-07-2009

    lol, post this here. http://www.originalpoetry.com/forum/view/topic/topic_id/1084 Looks like a glazing!

    Hanna

    07/07/2009

    It is already posted there

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