DISCIPLINE
sassy rule breaker
skirt up, panties down, bare butt
reddened, blistered, tamed
DISCIPLINE
4 Comments
Tags: Erotic Haiku
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ginga commented on DISCIPLINE
08-21-2009
- Hanna, Certainly you were only undressing for undressings sake. LOL! Very clever this one here is! ginga
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StandingBear commented on DISCIPLINE
07-08-2009
- There is no excuse for dah, dah is just dah. A very nicely written tingle/tease of a work pertaining to erotic haiku. Great write.
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07/08/2009
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PRober commented on DISCIPLINE
07-08-2009
- short, sweet and mighty fine... need a spanking hon? I can sure give a fun one! lol!
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07/08/2009
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dahlusion commented on DISCIPLINE
07-06-2009
- This poem has made my mouth water in such an erotic way: "skirt up, panties down, bare butt" — I unbuttoned my pants after reading this line.
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07/07/2009
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