The Chat

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    This poem came from long periods of little or nothing to do.

    The Chat

    Night was coming to it`s end,
    my spirit came to light.
    At last my resting over,
    Fairwell to the night.
    My resting at it`s end,
    I wondered what the day would send.
    Then awoke, thinking i want to start a trend.
    The day to be long,
    I was looking for a song.
    Or something new,
    or something to do.


    I think i will call a friend,
    I want to start a trend.
    Hello my friend said i,
    knowing why, going to try.
    Do you have a little time to spare ?
    I have an idea, if explanation you can bear.
    I want to start a trend i swear.


    What sort of trend, came the reply.
    I said, the sort that people like.
    A solar powered bike.
    Powered by the sun,
    no pedelling to be done.
    A lazey sort of run,
    if only just for fun.


    Said my friend, oh that sort of trend.
    I have two hands to lend.
    What will be the cost.
    After parts a bill they send,
    parts must not be lost.
    I replied, we could only learn,
    if it`s too much for what we earn.
    We could try another time,
    further down the line.
    When our wallets fat,
    financialy happier, how`s that ?
    We carried on to our daily work,
    a friend and a really good chat.


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