The Cabin

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    The Cabin

    Two bodies intertangled under blankets of warmth,
    keeping the coldness out and everything else.
    The bodies part for just enough room still
    for the massive warm hardness, to slide in..
    she could feel.
    Feeling his ass tighten with each penetrating thrust,
    pressing down against it...it becomes her must.
    Tightening and throbbing she feels it sliding inside,
    she becomes so wet, lubricating his hardness, as it
    penetrates further inside
    Within the stillness around them,
    they're in their own little world of movement and sound,
    feeling the release that they need, growing more intense inside.
    Opening herself wider to recieve every bit
    he reaches inside deeper...feeling this perfect fit.
    Explosion, eruptions..she loses all control,
    releasing his life force, deep within her
    in throbs he lets it go...
    With the satisfaction they relax together in a warm glow,
    and slowly falling asleep, together they go...

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    KIMKIM commented on The Cabin

    03-05-2009

    I love it...I thought you were describing me and my man for a moment! (smile) Sensual!

    ivecute77 commented on The Cabin

    12-08-2008

    I don't know what to say to that, it was a good visual thats for sure.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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