the battle betweenmind and heart

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  • State Of Mind After Break
    • krar
    • is taking it easy

    Poem Commentary

       I have never before written a poem and I wrote this poem after I broke up with my girl friend when undergoing struggle b/n me to go back or not.  one more thing I learned english in north america
       thank you

    the battle betweenmind and heart

       


      the way so narrow , the door half open.

     I saw you calling, for me  to come in.

     my heart is so big, it sees full open.

    my mind tells me ,that I dont fit in.

    I returned back ,following ma mind.

    leaving in my heart, at your door step.

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    bforibus commented on the battle betweenmind and heart

    06-17-2009

    wow. thats so sad. its like you thinking you arent good enough. its a vicious attack at a self esteem. i love that pour of emotion into this poem. i love the flow. it seems you like the chaos behind the words. very unique.
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    krar

    06/18/2009

    thx...that was part of it..and part of it was pride which strangles you sometimes

    Aphrena commented on the battle betweenmind and heart

    06-17-2009

    wow even with little words its very powerful im in that exact situation right now not know whether to stay or go. i like it
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    krar

    06/17/2009

    thx..is a very hard situation and you know it coz you are right there.

    mysticmynd commented on the battle betweenmind and heart

    06-17-2009

    AWWW MAN...,with so little said I felt every word. If this had been longer I might have gotten something in my eyes. Good outlet
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    krar

    06/17/2009

    thank you ..apperciate that

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