state after break up

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state after break up

  

  I took you places,you have never been.

 I gave you rhings, you were desirin'

 I fucked you so hard,till you get lousy.

 called you pretty ,when you were fatty.

milked your mouth, till you get fuzzy.

what is that you want ,I did not give you.

coz you cheated on me ,out of a blue.

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bforibus commented on state after break up

06-17-2009

i dont know if you wanted that last part to be out of a blue or the blue, but the emotion in this poem was hot.full of a you aint shit anyway kind of feel to it. i loved it.

krar

06/18/2009

thx ..you are right..wanted to say out of the blue...but could not edit it...ya that how it feels

Aphrena commented on state after break up

06-17-2009

ugh cheaters suck im sorry that happened to you and i totally understand your confusion you did a good job letting it all out.

krar

06/17/2009

Cheaters are always cheaters...thank you

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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