state after break up

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    state after break up

       

      I took you places,you have never been.

     I gave you rhings, you were desirin'

     I fucked you so hard,till you get lousy.

     called you pretty ,when you were fatty.

    milked your mouth, till you get fuzzy.

    what is that you want ,I did not give you.

    coz you cheated on me ,out of a blue.

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    bforibus commented on state after break up

    06-17-2009

    i dont know if you wanted that last part to be out of a blue or the blue, but the emotion in this poem was hot.full of a you aint shit anyway kind of feel to it. i loved it.
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    krar

    06/18/2009

    thx ..you are right..wanted to say out of the blue...but could not edit it...ya that how it feels

    Aphrena commented on state after break up

    06-17-2009

    ugh cheaters suck im sorry that happened to you and i totally understand your confusion you did a good job letting it all out.
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    krar

    06/17/2009

    Cheaters are always cheaters...thank you

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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