Tear Drops

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    Tear Drops

     As days go by, i tend to cry
    because thoughts of my fututre are very dry
    A lonely cry as the tear drops fall
    and for why they come, i cant recall
    cant survive this painful feeling
    cant take it destroying my very being
    ive drained my body with so many cries
    on some of the days i just want to die..
    i choose to live, for im scared of death
    but ill think of heaven till my last breath
                                      K_P

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    poetrygirl95 commented on Tear Drops

    04-28-2011

    This is all what I feel.. I understand where you are comming from.. But you have to trust that everything in the end will be okay.
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    killingP13

    07/20/2011

    yea though its hard sometimes i try my best and i see you do too

    poetrygirl95

    07/21/2011

    There is always a rainbow after the storm and sometimes it just takes a little while to get here.. thats what I live by.

    killingP13

    07/28/2011

    :) yea i can see it slowing coming into view

    poetrygirl95

    07/30/2011

    Thats a good thing! Remember it always rains hardest on the people who deserve the most sun.

    redbloodink commented on Tear Drops

    04-26-2011

    Happy and sad times pass by the love of God and His mightyness always remains....... Lean on Him I do..... red
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    killingP13

    05/19/2011

    thank you red :)... sorry for the late reply

    angelchaser commented on Tear Drops

    02-11-2011

    I know how you feel, I've been there. Sometimes the pain of life can be too great, but hopefully you'll go on, life is too precious to lose. *hugs*
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    killingP13

    02/11/2011

    im happy and sad that you understand how i feel...i dont wish for anyone to ever feel this kind of pain specially not a kindhearted person like your self thank you for your encouragement

    sevyn7 commented on Tear Drops

    01-27-2011

    This is another heart felt poem, we all go through days when tears flow, from a thought, or sad memories, not sure why they come when they do, but its good to get it out. I guess thats why we write, to get it out, it eases it a little. But the thing to remember is you are loved, by friends, family, and that special person. Stay sweet, Stay strong, and God Bless. Dave
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    killingP13

    02/03/2011

    thank you so much :)

    Teardrops commented on Tear Drops

    01-21-2011

    you must live to write this wonderful and deep poetry . You have the love now write about it Marie
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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