Talk About our Love

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  • oblondula
  • is confused.. mondern day technology sure does have its downfalls

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A lil cheesy, but decent

Talk About our Love

You make me happy, and I love it when you smile
Now I know your the one I want to be with for awhile
You take my breath away; my heart is in your hands
You capture my love, just like great kings capture land
This love is so true, ready to unfold
By the one in whos hands my heart he holds
Nothing could be better than getting your love
For you I think the One in the heavens above
Your love is so real, suculent and sweet
Let me lay my head upon your head and hear your heart beat
I love you so dearly believe it's true
I'd give up gold to spend the rest of my life with you...

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Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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