Sweetie

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    Sweetie


    Reminiscing those days when we will sit by the Ganges
    Looking at the endless stretch of the Ocean
    Prophesying our sweet love and dreams to each other
    I have come to build my castle around you
    The only image that forms in my memory as I stare at the door everyday
    Waiting for your return in to my alms so we can continue from where we stopped
    But only realizing that this is real: You ve bided farewell forever
    What happened to our long love at the bank?
    The promises to stay strong forever?
    What do I tell your seed who cries everyday for you?
    That you ve vanished?
    That you smiled to the colds hands of the almighty?




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    sk commented on Sweetie

    04-10-2009

    Wow - very moving...and quite sad.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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