sweet as morning dew
sweet as morning dew
sipped from bending Lily lip-
swollen honey bee
sweet as morning dew
6 Comments
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danmartyjake1 commented on sweet as morning dew
02-23-2011
- You are def good at these and I really like the imagery on this one. The bee comes into full view. Well Done!
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02/23/2011
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Tempestlady commented on sweet as morning dew
02-15-2011
- Beautiful picture, beautiful imagery, and beuatiful words. Lovely piece. Write on...............Tlady
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02/16/2011
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RHPeat commented on sweet as morning dew
02-14-2011
- Joyous, a smile begins in the bowels to uplift pulse. TFS A poet friend//RH Peat
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02/14/2011
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cutbanksam commented on sweet as morning dew
02-13-2011
- I like this one, very well put and evokes a sense of springtime
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02/13/2011
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Helios commented on sweet as morning dew
02-12-2011
- I think we have discovered a poetic talent... I admire your use of imagery to infuse in the reader a subliminal feelings.
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