Suspended Realities

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    Suspended Realities

    The dripping coast of the letters we host,
    Yet some amusing hoax.
    From my beer battered guts,
    Messed and soiled of hot flesh.
    Her eyes did tease.

    The vast beyond of harms harmony,
    A jail house trip and a crack of a whip.
    This perspective must I see?
    Give it away then put away,
    They will see me free.

    Her lies bring to it flies,
    As if rotten flesh her love feeds.
    Appealing to folks with disregards to a hoax,
    For the love was real,
    Yet her eyes are blind,
    But, just the first time.

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    mmichelle97219 commented on Suspended Realities

    02-16-2009

    You got a good poem, but the first two lines do not make any sense together at all, and so you lose the reader right off the bat. I would rethink them. Michelle

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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