Superman

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    Superman

    I don't know how
    to this. I guess
    that's why i'm writing
    it down.

    You stand there, so
    calm and collected. I
    stare back just the same.

    Inside, my heart
    shatters, but it doesn't
    show. I don't wince,
    or cry or frown.

    I wish I could
    hear what you really
    think. So wild and
    reckless, you make
    a tiger seem tame.

    I love you, I miss
    you, my super hero,
    my superman.

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    shakeme4life commented on Superman

    09-20-2010

    great poem , where are the supermen? i love the vunerablity of your poem

    Wakeitha commented on Superman

    09-20-2010

    It seems like you got your heart hurt. The poem seems very sad because know one wants to be hurt.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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