Summer Fun

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    Earthly helped me on this one

    Summer Fun

    No school is cool
    Sleep in late
    Go to the pool
    the water's great

    Have a good time
    Playing WII for hours
    Watch TV
    and water Mom's flowers

    Visit with friends
    eat barbaque

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    SuSpence commented on Summer Fun

    09-11-2010

    Nice read, Now summer is over and I read this I am left to reminisce over the memories of the wonderful summer that has passed the door so quickly, like sands through the hourglass. Keep writing my friend. Peace and Love, Spence
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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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