Imbalance

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    I thought of this while reading the manga Ultimo, the next day in the middle of the day near the end of period 3 I wrote this in my agenda. Ultimo is one of the manga in Shonen Jump, a monthly magazine with new volumes of six manga. I got the June issue of Shonen Jump at Walmart the other day for $4.49.

    Imbalance

     The balance between good and evil
    must always be maintained,
    though every now and again
    there is an imbalance.
    One side is stronger or weaker
    than the other and there is an imbalance between these two,
    good and evil ever powerful or ever weak,
    there is always an argument
    where they have differing opinions.
    what is good, what is evil,
    history is set to repeat itself
    ever differing yet the same.

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    Tinytree commented on Imbalance

    05-25-2010

    Really good topic. I don't agree that either is weak. It takes strength to be good and not be swayed by evil. It also takes strength to be evil. I think being evil would be very tiring.
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    earthly commented on Imbalance

    05-10-2010

    Rhymer is right dear, other than the misspell , this is a very insightful piece-Namaste...Earthly
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    Rhymer commented on Imbalance

    05-08-2010

    Excellent write and insight for one so young. 10 from me, but I believe you mean (imbalance) instead of imbalence
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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