Suicide

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    Suicide
    If you know me than you will be surprised
    If your one of my best friends you will be devastated
    Last night I will have tried to take my life
    Whether I do it completely or just partly
    Sooner or later the knife will cut cleanly
    And there will be no saving me.

    It's because of the pain I've caused everyone
    It would be easier if I lived no longer
    If you believe this I will no longer care
    Because my life will be over
    No one cares enough to cry
    Every one will be laughing all day.

    If you wish to know why
    You may have to read a little
    On a letter
    But either way don't die too, you have a purpose
    I don't
    Be good my wonderful friends.



    By: Melissa Daffron

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    Dreamer123 commented on Suicide

    07-31-2009

    Wow. this is such a strong message. very emotional. made me sentimental. we all have a purpose to live. we shouldn't end our lives like that. Please don't go that way. you have talent. This poem impacted me. this is really deep but don't do this. this is amazing emotional poem that can really open someones eyes. great write. This is incredible. God bless you. :) :D take care alright.
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    Crush commented on Suicide

    07-31-2009

    i have read only one of your poems thus far and i am inspired...please don't stop. i understand those feelings and i also know that they can subside and most do. stay, please.
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    Romano commented on Suicide

    06-16-2009

    This sounds more like a suicide letter than a poem, at first i was like yeah this is a poem but as it got near the end i was like naw this sounds mor elike a letter. i hope that you know you have inspired all around you and made a difference to those who know you. I care about you and yet have met you ,but do know that God has given you a talent to share with the world. God's not done with you yet
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    carey commented on Suicide

    04-19-2009

    Hi I read your poem about suicide and i hope that you would care about yourself more to do anything that what god gave you as a gift and that is your soul. Please I care about you.
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    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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