Animals

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Animals

Animals are exhilarating creatures,
In many different land features,
They give happiness to those who seek it,
Most always find it.

It doesn't matter how far you travel,
As long as you don't unravel,
They help you stay alive,
Even if you have to dive.

As long as you help,
Sea creatures won't loose any kelp,
Help protect them,
They might let you collect them.


Help the wolf catch the deer,
Help the coyote fear,
Lead the Squirrel to the nut,
Have the nut lead to a hunters hut.



By: Melissa S. Daffron

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Jamshid commented on Animals

05-24-2009

Hi there, it loos U'r trying to make good use of rhyme but it is not just enough I think. A bit soherence talks a lot n such cases. Good trial anyway.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

mdaffron’s Poems (16)

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Horse and Rider 0
Moonlight 0
My Life 0
Moonlight 0
Living Without You 0
A Trapped Mind 0
The Dark Oath 1
Animals 1
Mother 2
Father 1
The Ocean 3
Suicide 4
Horses are my life 0
Friends 0
Family 1
Love 0