Suicide Confession

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Suicide Confession

Mentally as a teen I was losing my mind
reasons for living far gone behind
Sitting by this window
I could just jump out of
with no dream or hope to fly like a dove
weighing my options to keep on livin
my main focus is to erase this pain I'm givin
Out of no where,
I become aware
of a project at school that's due
essay and presentation, that's an A times two

Here now let me make my suicide confession
education and literature, it's my obsession
how can it not be, it saved my life
still giving me a chance to be a wife
a mother and a friend
intelligent, kind, there for you until the end

As you read these words don't think it's a prediction
cause thses thoughts I share are not a work of fiction

Let's say my obsession hand't kept me from making that jump
then I couldn't put my pen to paper and pump...

Out the motivation you need
to help you proceed
My brother my sister
never be a quitter
hold your head up high
your reason for livin is higher then then the sky
keep faith in the higher power
with him any stress you can devour

Putting this pen to paper is truly an obsession
hope you got the message from Poetic's Suicide Confession

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ansari commented on Suicide Confession

07-04-2010

Yes I've learnt many times over that when u feel life is useless there are thousands who need a comforting word which can change their lives. lets commit our lives to fulfilling others dreams, that feeling of satisfaction gives us inner strength. a10 from me.

lovettk commented on Suicide Confession

04-19-2009

i just got this site, this is one of the best i've seen so far, i saw the bio. glad you didn't take the leap.

mindless commented on Suicide Confession

03-10-2009

I really like it cause once i thought I knew the whole story it took me somewhere else unexpectedly. NICE

miami commented on Suicide Confession

01-04-2009

i love that poem

JEAGLEFEATHER commented on Suicide Confession

01-03-2009

Nice poem. I write on darkness & suicide a lot. I enjoyed this take on the subject.Although I do not think all suicide is giving up, sometimes it is just a method to move on. Great poem.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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