Such BS

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    Such BS
    This is such BS,
    My feelings and thoughts are one big mess.
    Don't know what to do,
    Don't want to think about you.
    Just give me a blade,
    I'll show you how I'm made.
    Carving things in my skin,
    I doubt it's a sin.

    Nobody knows the real me,
    Sadly, I don't want people to see.

    I would've sinned,
    By getting gone like the wind.
    Maybe using a knife,
    To depart my life.
    I think I want to die,
    Popping Xanax not to get high.
    Bye forever or by for now,
    I'm still in shock saying "Wow!"

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    jesusfreake commented on Such BS

    09-12-2009

    life...no one understands...sigh...teenagers years seem like the longest and most confusing...im tired of not having anyone to relate to...u speak my language...u just want to escape...send me a private message if u like...im amazed by ur poetry...its so Awesome and i feel like i can really relate!!
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    jesusfreake

    09/12/2009

    I know a person who can replace the crappy feelings....and since we have met i have never felt better...i feel so alive!

    nikki78 commented on Such BS

    04-20-2009

    REMEMBER IF YOU NEED TO TALK IM HERE
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    Plot121 commented on Such BS

    04-20-2009

    I would have to agree with the title for the most part. The work has flow and good images but too self loathing for my taste. Plot121
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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