Strings

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Strings

Like a puppet on a string,

Except many on the body.

All are pulling

Simultaneously.

Lifting me up horizontally

In a reclining position.

At first I feel their support.

Reassurance that I will not hit the ground.

 

But then

The pull against my skin starts to ache.

I need to readjust

But it’s too late.

 

I’m trapped.

 

Struggling to break free, but I can’t even move.

The invisible struggle continues within.

Part of my psyche powering the strings that confine me.

Part of me desperately wanting to be free.

In turmoil within and out.

 

When will it end?

 

As the desire for freedom grows,

So does the awareness of being stifled.

Back and forth

My mind accepts reality with defeat.

But then

The fire within me roars on

And I know one day

I will escape.

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DeepEclipse commented on Strings

07-23-2010

(Reassurance that I will not hit the ground.) - Man how tormenting when a mind of survival has no trust to put into anything. This poem makes one wonder...do you go mad fighting the strings or accept the prison? Excellent depiction of the torment.

Stryx commented on Strings

07-19-2010

Sometimes I wonder how much 'free will' we really have. Or are we all just puppets on strings? Nice write.

dahlusion commented on Strings

07-19-2010

Love your expression and your hope in this poem: "As the desire for freedom grows, So does the awareness of being stifled. Back and forth My mind accepts reality with defeat. But then The fire within me roars on And I know one day I will escape"—yes, you will escape! Bravo!

JadieD

07/19/2010

Thanks, dahlusion! Your words of encouragement are very much appreciated :-) Glad you enjoyed the poem!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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