Story About A Couple

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    Story About A Couple


    Imma tell u a lil story and it go a lil something like this
    Started off as friends and soon became lovers
    U could probably say they were suckers
    They would do anything 4 each other
    And as time came 2 past their relationship has last
    Even when ppl said "they weren't meant 2 be"
    Or say "u should be wit me"
    They turned their heads and said "they got something u can't see"
    Their time a part from each other waz da worse
    But when they were 2gether it waz just like a burst
    Of neva ending love dat no 1 could break
    They got something special going on
    Like wat u hear in those love songs
    And when u find some1 dat makes u feel this way u have 2 hold on
    2 them and make it last cuz u don't want something good like dat 2 pass

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    cmlestrade commented on Story About A Couple

    08-13-2009

    Very nice use of lanquage and sentiment. This was a great tribute to true love.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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