STORM

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  • Lost Love

    STORM
    Storm

    I’m in the midst of a storm,
    Seems to be an endless one.
    I sail astray, I am doomed that way.

    II

    Can’t find my port,
    Your body escapes me,
    I am lost in a sea of sorrow,
    Come back! Come find me,
    For my port is you, I crave to love you.

    III

    The wind which flattened me
    Blows strong, tearing me away from you
    If I can’t find you, please come to my rescue.

    IV

    In the midst of the storm, desperate,
    I call your name. If you don’t hear me,
    I will drown. I need your love to port.

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    poet4dasoul commented on STORM

    07-14-2009

    This poem reminds me of my own poem called lost inspiration, and I know completely what it is like to be in the dark. It can drive one crazy, but always remember that wherever there is dark there also is light. It might not be right in front of us, but it is definitely around the corner; so the time to port is always at hand. thanks for that write poet it is a good thing.
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    Mlucio

    07/14/2009

    Good morning dear and thanks for your comment. Yes, I completely agree with what you wroght here, this is the way I think and this is the way I see things. Thanks once again and be blessed. Mauro

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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