Start Over
The pain that I wish you saw,
From here its a lonely view,
Whats it like where the painters draw,
Hopefully they can start anew.
Start Over
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Crush commented on Start Over
02-15-2010
- not too shabby....big punch, short stance. nice ! sometimes the fewest words say the most.
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cdeluhery87 commented on Start Over
02-15-2010
- Such power in such a short poem, this is great caboose "The pain that I wish you saw, from here its a lonely view" wonderful
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