Soulless 2

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    • kpeery09
    • "Never Compromise not even in the face of Armageddon"-Jackie Earle Haley as Rorschach from Watchmen movie

    Poem Commentary

    This is part 2 to my poem titled Soulless, hope you all enjoy.

    Soulless 2

    I've realized I have no soul,
    I don't care for the ones I claim to love.

    The inner darkness and temptation grows stronger everyday;
    with no telling what will happen to those around me.

    I go on everyday having an open mind, not needing to be careful with what i say.

    These people and they're angels search the world for a way to give me my soul back but, whoever said I wanted it back?

    Violent thoughts increase in my head crawling to the surface every day.

    I'm now a prisoner in my own home,
    being watched for any odd behavior.

    I sit in my room holding an hatchet within my hands,
    my darkness releases charging at a man watching over me .

    The man closed the door, the hatchet begins cutting through the door;
    "Don't say here's Johnny" the man says
    "I have something better, here's Sammy" I said to him as I cut through the door.

    I refuse for my soul to be brought back into this walking soulless man. 


     

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    pocketofdreams6 commented on Soulless 2

    01-06-2011

    This really was awesome... I just hope you really havent seen this darkness, and you are just imaginging it... although the best of times can be compared to our darkest times, and appreciated.

    Artie commented on Soulless 2

    01-04-2011

    Not bad eery!! I like this!! You should do more like these - 10 from me

    brokenhearted11 commented on Soulless 2

    01-03-2011

    i like the idea of random angels and people scouring the earth for your lost soul without even asking if you wanted it back. great job here, keep writing

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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