Sorry

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  • Lost Love

    Sorry
    Sorry for not being your slave
    Sorry for not being your toy
    Sorry for not being there
    Only for you to enjoy
    I love you so much
    Yet you say such hurtful things to me
    That brings tears in my eyes
    Dripping like rain and pain in my heart
    That feels like its getting ripped apart
    What did I do so wrong to you
    Didn't I give you my love from the start
    Or maybe it's that you don't care anymore
    If its so then let me go, let me be
    Let me find out what else there is in the sea
    I will never forget you
    And I hope you never forget me
    Just keep the good memories
    And throw the bad ones away
    Remembering that you will always stay
    In my heart


    Mike Soisaleumsack

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    kdavidscott1 commented on Sorry

    06-07-2009

    No need to be sorry there - we can do all we can when in love - but one thing we cannot do and that is make someone love us - either they do or they don't - if they do you'll know because they will still be there with you (as long as you are treating them right - going to the same length if not more to prove your love for them is true) if not then they are not supposed to be there... sound like the efforts by the writer should have been more than enough.... KD
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    ShyGuy316

    02/12/2010

    thank you, its wierd how today i felt so shitty and down so i thought about going on here to write a new poem which isn't done yet. its getting pretty close but a few more touch ups. but anyways i never actually thought ppl check out other ppls poems on here but i'm glad i check my comments cause i think you just made my day a lil more brighter. thx again

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