Some Artist's Woe

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Very much an artist in his own right yet he feels his talent is keeping him distant from being accepted in ordinary life. He's struggle is both a confusion and a humor in life. Poem was written in 1985.

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Some Artist's Woe

Oh I say he’s just that troubled artist in need
Feeling sick about how his sensibilities proceed
Breaking away like a child off to abandon his seed
And bearing such pain to contain his unusual breed

Though I must agree to people who find him rather funny
His penchant for translating normality into an oddity
Perhaps such humor maneuvers his fancy to the ordinary
So conceal the crying boy beneath that abnormality

Behind those rubber shoes, if he must, grow a beard
But actors on the street may not always succeed
For wise men pick easy an unnatural stick in a field
As you and your gift simply make an inseparable creed

Alas, it is nights when he secludes himself I worry
To unload that talent which has been stored in secrecy
Comes this hidden case from under the bed, not even Mom could see
Wretched is the man whose talent causes him to bleed in pity

 

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Marsink commented on Some Artist's Woe

01-11-2010

I am entranced in the flow of meter and rhyme, telling the unfortunate story of obscure hiding in emotion and it's probable doomed outcome. (just my perception, not written in stone) GOOD STUFF

Charlie23 commented on Some Artist's Woe

01-11-2010

I like this poem, although it seems to be told from a personal view, it brings many personalities to my mind.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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