so long

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    so long

    Have you ever missed someone
    so much you ache?
    you wish he was there but he never comes
    you wish to say something to someone
    and you realise He is just the perfect ears
    and you want to show
    He is still the best observer.

    Though it is dreadful
    you want to go to the great beyond
    just for that company
    you cannot get elsewhere.
    He is with you
    yet you cannot reach him.

    And it is just like yesterday
    since you last held him
    but He is gone
    never to be near again.

    Have you ever loved someone
    so much you ache?
    you don't want to say it
    but it is so long and He
    cannot be back.

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    whispers commented on so long

    05-30-2009

    sometimes its hard to understand ,but it is a gift to be able to feel so deep because of the great love that you have inside.someday you will realize it. believe me I know.your poem is beautiful. they say there is apurpose for everything..it is sooooo trueee. sometimes it can hurt, but God has a reason for everything..whispers

    Phoenix9 commented on so long

    01-25-2009

    kind of sad and emtional

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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