Springsize commented on Sleep is Overrated

09-14-2010

Cannibis is a known relaxant, and much easier on the human system than prescription drugs with worse after-effects than a slight burn to the lungs... and those who indulge can find freedom as a temporary release, as your poem illustrates to me... .. I really like your phrase "obese clouds" and your ending is more than correct... it seems that without dreams, or deep REM sleep, the body doesn't completely rejuvenate, especially so, for the mind. I like your ending inference that dreaming is important with sleep and Especially in the waking place, dreams are the stimulus for something more... good one.

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StandingBear commented on Sleep is Overrated

08-31-2010

Aerosmith's "Dream On" plays in the background here whilst i'm reading about what a can of cannabis can't free. Cool write! SBear

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jamie7121f commented on Sleep is Overrated

08-31-2010

Loved it. I'm a dreamer to :) Great concept............................................................

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JadedJezzabel commented on Sleep is Overrated

07-29-2010

I love the whole concept of this.......most of all because i relate....I did not dream while sleeping for a long long time.....great job.

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cherrymccloud commented on Sleep is Overrated

07-24-2010

keep looking in the mirror is what I say..you can't go wrong becauses there is no one else to point the finger at neither infront of, behind, or beside yourself....only you,,you ,,you,,,in all circumstances we can blame others for our faults, mistakes, shortcomings, etc. but in the end...look in the mirror...we always have a stake in it because of being in denial about something, not owning up to something, or enabling somethings...think about it

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