Silent Tears

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Silent Tears

 
I could not help but notice as the day turned into night
that it was indeed your time to leave
you were turning towards the light.
You promised somehow I'd get through it, for I had known all along
eventually god would take you, although your will was iron strong
 
As you spoke, one silent tear rolled down your paled cheek
you whispered you were leaving, your body was so weak
you said your life on earth had ended
it was time for you to leave
you asked me not to cry
but only to believe

I must open my heart to see you, a butterfly in flight,
a sudden breeze amongst the heat
a shooting star in the night.
I must open my heart to see you, close my eyes, say a prayer
I must keep my heart open
and forever you'll be near.

One silent tear rolls down my lonely cheek.

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Mandi commented on Silent Tears

09-25-2010

See I told you people would like your poems. What's not to like? Now no more faux shyness ... writie them and share them.

Teardrops commented on Silent Tears

08-23-2010

Lost my husband 7 years ago so know this pain . I still hear his voice in the wind thanks for the read Marie

MaisyMiles

08/24/2010

Marie, i believe it is his voice in the wind... thanks for the kind words and for sharing your work, i really enjoyed it! MaisyMiles

Crush commented on Silent Tears

08-23-2010

well done, i can feel the emotional pain but i do detect a glimmer of hope. good show . 9 from me.

MaisyMiles

08/23/2010

thank you! I appreciate you taking time to read!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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